Teachers Comments

Research & Planning
Ok Hadley-looking pretty good so far. Here's a few pointers:-
1. Planning will increase as you add drafts when you begin work on production
2. More on focus group: profile of them and more examples of their opinions. e.g. choosing your masthead, title, etc.
3. Not overly keen on presentation throughout: why nothingl ike a prezi, especially when you've included a tutorial on using prezi?! Work on jazzing up presentation and breaking down text dominated blog entries
4. Overall quality of expression needs to be tightened up by doing a SPG check ( lots of silly, minor errors) and using some appropriate media theory. I'll send you a link to help with website terminology. Overall, some excellent research for both ancillaries.

Currently working at 13/20

-More planning has been added about the masthead and referring to the focus group
-I am looking to create a prezi for my evaluation to 'jazz' up the presentation of my blog, I have also tried to use graphs in order to show results from focus group work to diversify the way things are representated on my blog.
-Focus Group work has been done for both of the ancillarys and will continue as I get closer to my final product.